五、2018年天津卷

　　试题回顾

　　假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将与7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。

　　（1）比赛的时间、地点；

　　（2）邀请他的原因；

　　（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

　　注意：

　　（1）词数不少于100；

　　（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

　　（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：

　　世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

　　Dear Chris,

　　I have good news to tell you.

　　...

　　I'm looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Jin

　　【思路点拨】

　　本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：

　　一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：

　　1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请；

　　2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；

　　3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；

　　4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

　　二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

　　【内容要点】

　　1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；

　　2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；

　　3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris 曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；

　　4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

　　【满分范文】

　　Dear Chris,

　　I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.

　　With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.

　　I' m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

　　五、2018年北京卷

　　试题回顾

　　第一节（15分）

　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

　　1. 表示欢迎；

　　2. 推荐他上哪所大学；

　　3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。

　　注意：1. 词数不少于50；

　　2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Jim,

　　...

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。

　　【满分范文】

　　Dear Jim,

　　I' m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.

　　Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is, perfect for you where you. can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

　　I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

　　试题回顾

　　第二节（20分）

　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的过程。

　　注意：词数不少于60。

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文为图片介绍类作文，这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知，是写一篇记叙文。

　　1. 认真读图，把握中心。

　　根据提示可知，内容是带领外国学生体验中国茶文化的全过程，介绍了茶具，泡茶，沏茶，品茶的过程，所以这是这组图画所要表达的中心。

　　2.初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。

　　在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。本文是讲述上周发生的事情，故时态要以过去时为主，人称是第一人称，尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。

　　3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。

　　运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。

　　4.反复审核，修改错误。

　　一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。5.宜详则详，该略则略。对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。

　　【满分范文】

　　Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.

　　On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.

　　In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time.

　　Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.

　　At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.

　　【亮点说明】

　　巧妙使用定语从句，提升了文章档次：

　　Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.

　　使用非谓语动词，使句子表达更简洁：

　　On arriving at the tea house…

　　I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety,

　　Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture

　　holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.

　　使用倒装句突出重点。

　　Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.

　　使用it做形式主语，使表达更地道。

　　It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.

　　七、2018年江苏卷

　　试题回顾

　　书面表达(满分25分)

　　请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

　　【写作内容】

　　1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名( ratings)进行消费的现象；

　　2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

　　【写作要求】

　　1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

　　2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

　　3.不必写标题

　　【评分标准】

　　内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

　　【思路点拨】

　　今年作文仍然是读写作文，即先用30词概括阅读材料，然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料，然后进行比较和分析，表明态度，作出价值判断。

　　文章首段要简要介绍两段材料，第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论，结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭，看了on-line rating，结果饭菜很不好吃，从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱。

　　然后写你对online rating的看法，表明观点，注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。

　　文章属于议论文，要注意主题句的使用，论点之间要注意有条理。文章可主要采用一般现在时，第三人称来写。

　　【满分范文】

　　Possible version one:

　　As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.

　　There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.

　　Possible version two:

　　Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.

　　There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay

　　for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.

　　Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.