二、2018年新课标全国卷II

　　试题回顾

　　你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：

　　1. 短片内容：学校的发展；

　　2. 放映时间、地点；

　　3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数100左右；

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　【试题分析】

　　2018年高考英语书面表达体裁为通知，替学校的“英语天地”邀请学生看英文短片Growing together。继2015年，2016年，2017年连续三年考查信件认识人写信之后，全国二卷考查了应用文中的另一典型体裁，内容为邀请电影相关的时间，地点的通知。学生对该题材和内容熟悉，对词汇的要求也相对基础。

　　纵观全国II卷英语书面表达，从题材上来讲，除了2014年考查了记叙文，十年中九年均考查了应用文，应用文占90%。所以考生在高考的英语写作的准备中应当把重心放在应用文上，熟练掌握英语应用文写作的几个相关专项，并且熟识高考英语基础词汇。

　　2009——2018年高考英语新课标卷II书面表达

　　【写作点拨】

　　英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。

　　第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。

　　【满分范文】

　　Notice

　　Boys and girls,

　　May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.

　　To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th . What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

　　Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

The Student Union

　　三、2018年新课标全国卷III

　　试题回顾

　　假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

　　1. 学校的体育场馆；

　　2. 主要的运动项目；

　　3. 你喜欢的项目。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数100左右：

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　【思路点拨】

　　本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。

　　首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆，场馆的位置，大小，开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些，可挑选一到两个做详细介绍，如学生的活动时间，活动形式，以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么，并简单分析喜欢的原因，自己从中得到的益处等。文章可主要采用一般现在时态，第一人称的方式来写。

　　【满分范文】

　　Dear Peter,

　　I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

　　To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

　　All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

　　四、2018年浙江卷

　　试题回顾

　　第一节 应用文写作

　　假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：

　　1. 口语能力：

　　2. 相关经验；

　　3. 应聘目的。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数80左右；

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　【思路点拨】

　　本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写应聘信。

　　第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1.口语能力：2.相关经验；3.应聘目的。

　　第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组）。

　　第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

　　第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

　　【范文】

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.

　　I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.

　　I' m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

　　试题回顾

　　第二节 读后续写（满分25分）

　　阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

　　It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.

　　We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afermoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove me up to his farm in Pecos.

　　His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.

　　In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don't get lost!" “OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late aftermoon sunmixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven ( 编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.

　　注意：

　　1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

　　2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

　　3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

　　4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

　　【思路点拨】

　　读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。

　　通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。

　　根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。

　　续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

　　【满分范文】

　　Suddenly a lttle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the 1eft to avoid the ittle rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, Hoid on! All of a sudden the horse began to run My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.

　　We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!